Inmersión

Pedro Novoa

Illustration by Andrea Popyordanova

Te sumerges. Vas oyendo en tu descenso a la abuela Hiromi: «Conseguirás las algas a la vieja usanza». Las palabras flotan alrededor de tu máscara artesanal, son peces desmenuzando hilachas de luz. De nada valió tu propuesta, la idea de seguir apostando por la medicina moderna. Los comprimidos de yodo, esas pastillas que tu hermano Yochan tomaba para combatir la anemia no sirvieron de mucho; a lo sumo, solo le pintarrajearon de rosado-pálido las mejillas por unas semanas.

Entonces vino tu entrenamiento: la acuatización, las inmersiones progresivas y, claro, las revisiones médicas para ver cómo respondía tu cuerpo. Debías asegurarte, mamá Misuki había muerto precisamente por haber subestimado la ciencia, por haber confiado más en el mito que en la realidad. Para la abuela, su hija no había fallecido, había sido convocada por el mar. Nadie le rebatió. Como era costumbre, no se lloró durante el velorio. Solo papá Hideo se refugió en el baño para contradecir la tradición y romper en llanto.

Papá era el descarriado de la familia. Si la fuerza de la gravedad exigía arrastrarnos, él levitaba. Si el mundo giraba hacia la izquierda, él aceleraba por la vía contraria. A sabiendas de lo que le esperaba, se dejó convencer por el doctor de Yochan y nos mudamos a Chosica con la esperanza de que el clima seco mejorara la salud de tu hermano.

Al enterarse, la abuela lo desheredó y alistó sus maletas. «Regresaré a mi tierra», dijo al cargar sus ochenta años hasta el aeropuerto, y partió rumbo a Japón. La orgullosa anciana vivió sola, sin electricidad, tarjetas ni supermercados alimentándose solo de pescado, mariscos y algas que ella misma extraía del mar. «Tuve todo el Océano Pacífico para mí», explicaría un año después.

Al comprobar que el clima chosicano, en vez de mejorar a Yochan, lo estaba perjudicando, regresamos al Callao. Fuiste tú la que convenció a la abuela para su regreso. Fue la época también de la traición, de tu traición: viajaste al Cusco porque conseguiste un buen trabajo, pero le dijiste a la abuela que vivías en Lima, a tan solo una hora de casa. Por eso, cada vez que había reuniones familiares argüías las más insólitas excusas. Y como eras su preferida—aunque nunca lo confesó—, terminaba aceptándote cualquier disparate. Pero cuando una llamada telefónica te anunció que la enfermedad de Yochan había entrado en crisis y que los doctores ya daban todo por perdido, tomaste el primer vuelo a Lima. Y allí estabas, sumergiéndote para conseguir esas algas que la abuela usaba cada vez que la ciencia médica desahuciaba a tu hermano.

Cuando Yochan tenía ocho años, la abuela se había sumergido; a los dieciséis, mamá Misuki, y ahora, a los veinticuatro te correspondía a ti por estricto relevo generacional. La mujer de tu hermano se ofreció en tu lugar, pero le faltaba historia en las venas. Las mujeres de nuestra familia se habían sumergido al mar hace miles de años buscando ostras y perlas. Desalentada, marcaría tu número telefónico con la misma desesperación con la que ahora sostenía la soga amarrada a tu cintura. Desde el bote, tu cuñada sudaba, sufría: tu cuerpo sumergido era de alguna manera su cuerpo.

Y tú, bocabajo, hundiéndote en un universo de leche negra con un snorkel que era un cuerno naciendo de tu boca. Y el agónico chorro de luz de la linterna demarcaba tu descenso, comprobando que la noche debajo de la superficie era más noche. Y sin aletas, sin traje de neopreno, con los senos expuestos y vistiendo tan solo una pequeña trusa, te dirigías, infinita, hacia un hervidero de algas donde debías encontrar las pardo-amarillentas, las famosas algas fucus. Esas plantas que tus ancestros, las Amas cazadoras de perlas, comían frescas para alejar los demonios de la debilidad. Lo malo era que preferían anidar siempre en la profundidad hostil de los acantilados. Ahora, treinta metros abajo, sentías a las rocosidades particularmente filudas.

Con especial cuidado, te introdujiste por entre matas de plancton y colonias de conchas. Y por fin, sentiste las vesículas hinchadas de las algas fucus recorrerte las manos, los brazos y redibujarte los senos. Arrancaste todo lo que pudiste para llenar tu saquillo de malla y listo: la mitad de la batalla estaba ganada.

Llevabas minuto y medio sin respirar: toda una eternidad dentro de las aguas. Sentías, por momentos, que tu lengua crecía, se aserpentaba y retraía hacia atrás: Así habría muerto mamá cuando no calculó el esfuerzo del camino de vuelta. Así podrías morir tú también. Te moviste lo mínimo posible para no saturar tu cuerpo de dióxido de carbono. Pegaste los brazos al muslo y diste las patadas justas para subir a la superficie. Lamentablemente un nudo atorado en tus talones alteró los planes. Al parecer, te habías enredado con tu propia soga.

«No temas al mar. Témele a no luchar por lo que amas en las profundidades», eran las palabras de la abuela, esos peces devorando sus retazos de luz al frente de tu máscara. Desde arriba, tu cuñada agotaba desesperados intentos por jalar una soga que con horror, descubría flácida y luego rota.

Luego de sentir puñetes invisibles en el diafragma, cierto mareo adormecedor que te sacaba del mundo, logras deshacer el nudo, liberarte del cinturón de plomo y ascender casi por instinto. Tu retorno progresaba lento pero constante, a menos de cinco metros de llegar a la superficie observas en contrapicado la quilla del bote crecer y definirse. Ves porciones de tu vida flotando como irregulares manchas de aceite. En medio de ellas, reconoces las mejillas pálidas que papá calcó en Yochan, la sonrisa de mamá cuando sacó su primera perla y la voz severa de la abuela corrigiéndolo todo. En este punto, tus brazos están agarrotados, tu lengua es una serpiente agigantada obstruyéndote el paladar. La luz se ha vuelto otra luz: más blanca y feroz. Comienzas a soñar. Y en tus sueños, te nacen aletas en los pies, y el oxigeno es una simple superstición.

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Winner of the “Story of 1000 Words” contest sponsored by Peru’s Caretas magazine, Pedro Novoa’s “The Dive” does not fit neatly into any genre. At 997 words, it lives on the margin of the cuento (short story), the cuento breve (short short story), and the microcuento (micro-story).

I posed the question of genre to the author in an email: “There is a very thin line between cuento and cuento breve that makes a sharp delineation difficult. I use devices common to the cuento, but also poetic devices like metaphor, similes, or symbols, which allow me to save space.” “Ultimately,” he concluded, “I think it’s a cuento breve because, unlike the microcuento, it forces the reader to take a breath, a brief but necessary pause before resuming the story.”

Written in the second-person tú, “The Dive,” whose first line is “Te sumerges” (You dive), is reminiscent of Carlos Fuentes’ Aura, whose opening line, “Lees ese anuncio” (You read the advertisement), has become of the most memorable, if not haunting lines in Spanish literature. This comparison is appropriate, however, for another reason: the novella, like the cuento breve, is a genre that demands linguistic economy.

As a translator, my immediate task was to honor the 1000-word limit. This meant, for example, avoiding periphrasis wherever possible and applying a scalpel to remove any excess.

Another consideration was the translation of the title, “Inmersión,” a polysemic noun, meaning at once “immersion,” “diving,” and even “under-water fishing.” This polysemy, of course, is intentional. No single English word, however, contains the same semantic values. In the end, I chose “The Dive” to echo my translation of the story’s first line.

In a final email, Novoa confessed that the story is based on his own experience of losing consciousness while taking diving lessons. “But,” he wrote, “following Vargas Llosa’s recommendation to not ‘parasitize’ our lives, I decided to use the experience in a way that demanded that I do research. That’s how I arrived at the pearl divers.” My translation, then, required that I also carry out research on Japan’s ama, which, like Novoa, I opted to leave in Japanese.

Novoa ended his email confession, saying, “Writing this story was part of an exorcism,” adding, “I wanted those demons that I had immersed to be known by as many people as possible.”

Consider, then, this translation an effort to help Novoa exorcize those demons.

Pedro Novoa (b. 1974, Lima) has won numerous literary prizes in his native Peru, including the Premio Nacional de Dramaturgia, in 2004, and the Premio Internacional de Cuento Corto Dante Alighieri for short stories. He has published the novel Seis metros de soga (Ediciones Altazor), which was awarded the Premio Nacional Horacio 2010 in the short novel category, and the novel Maestra vida (Alfaguara), winner of the Premio Internacional Mario Vargas Llosa. He has contributed to anthologies published in Chile, Argentina, Colombia, Spain, and Peru. His story “Inmersión,” which appears here as “The Dive,” recently won first prize in the XXVII Edición del Concurso de las 1000 Palabras, organized by the magazine Caretas. He is a professor at the Universidad César Vallejo.

George Henson is a translator of contemporary Latin American and Spanish prose. He has translated works by many notable writers, including Elena Poniatowska, Andrés Neuman, Claudia Salazar, Raquel Castro, Leonardo Fuentes, and Luis Jorge Boone. His translations have appeared variously in Words Without Borders, Buenos Aires Review, BOMB, Literal, and The Literary Review. His translations of Alberto Chimal have appeared in The Kenyon Review, Flash Fiction International, and World Literature Today. His book-length translations include Sergio Pitol's The Art of Flight and The Journey, both with Deep Vellum Publishing. George is a member of the Spanish faculty at the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign, where he is affiliated with the Center for Translation Studies. He holds a Ph.D. from the University of Texas at Dallas.

Alketa Halilaj (1990) is a young journalist and translator from Albania. She started her career in 2013 by co-funding and working as the Editor-in-Chief of Pa Fokus online magazine (Albania). Currently, she manages some online platforms on investments and entrepreneurship. She is also translating two books on Semiotics. During her short but intensive career, Alketa has been part of many translation projects—mainly in the literature field. She is very passionate about literature, semiotics and languages as she can speak Albanian, English, Italian, Spanish and German. During her free time, she takes online courses and reads literature blogs.

Eunice Kim is a schoolteacher and novelist who received her MFA from Otis College of Art and Design and her BA from Amherst College. Previously, she has been published in Lumen and Canyon Voices. In her free time, she advocates a sustainable lifestyle that seeks beauty in all its material and spiritual manifestations. Her fiction and nonfiction works are inspired by fairytales, meditation practices, and improvised music, and revolve around place, object, symmetry, and abstraction. Originally from New York, she is currently living in Los Angeles with her pet turtle Soren.

Fabrizio Mas was born in Lima, Peru. He has had instruction in different forms of art, but he is mainly a writer and a translator. As a writer, he has been published a number of times in literary magazines like Os Fazedores de Letras (Faculty of Letters of the University of Lisbon, Portugal). His most recent work is included in an anthology of young Latin American writers called Apuntes Sudacas (Ayni—Cooperativa Editorial, 2016), which will be published this year in Barcelona, Spain. He is currently working on a book of short stories and on a translation, from Portuguese into Spanish, of a Brazilian writer and composer. He is also part of an art collective in Peru called Sapos y Culebras. Besides his literary work, he has also worked as a scriptwriter for shortfilms in Peru, combining his work as a writer with his interest in cinema.

Sohini Basak has poems and short stories in the Missing Slate, Ambit, Lighthouse, Paris Lit Up, Helter Skelter, Emma Press and Poetrywala anthologies, and elsewhere. She won second prize at the inaugural RædLeaf India Poetry Prize in 2013 and was shortlisted for the Melita Hume and the Jane Martin poetry prizes in 2014. She studied literature and creative writing at the universities of Delhi, Warwick, and East Anglia, where she was awarded the Malcolm Bradbury continuation grant for poetry. She is one of the social media managers for Asymptote and works as an editor in Delhi.

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Avgi Daferera is a translator to/from English from/to Greek, and occasionally from Spanish. She was born in South Africa and raised in Greece. She studied English Literature at the Aristotle University of Thessaloniki, Greece, and holds an MA in Writing from the University of Warwick, UK, and an MA in Literary Translation from the University of East Anglia, UK. Apart from Greece and the UK Avgi has also lived in Spain and Belgium. She has worked as a freelance translator for over five years. Her translations have been published in various print and online magazines. Avgi was the Greek mentee during the first year of the British Centre for Literary Translation Mentorship Programme in 2012. She is currently working as a Children`s Rights Assistant at the Ersilia Literary Agency in Athens.

Rosy D'Souza is a poet, translator, teacher and a development professional and cofounder of Sunoh, an online radio station. In the past she has taught English literature to graduate students and has worked with internationally renowned NGOs to improve the quality of teaching-learning in primary schools in rural India. Currently, she has taken a sabbatical to be with her baby girl, Misuni. Her poetry has won many prizes and her anthology Manna Bisupu (Warmth of the Soil) is critically acclaimed. Her translation of H. Y. Sharada Prasad's Quit India Prison Dairy, Arivina Adumbola (A Playground of Wisdom) is a vital historic document of India's freedom struggle. Her translation of Jeremy Seabrook's essays into Kannada, Swargakke Moore Maili (Only Three Miles to Paradise) is forthcoming.

N. Kalyan Raman is a translator of contemporary fiction and poetry in Tamil, a major language of south India, into English. He has so far published nine volumes of Tamil fiction in translation, including Mole! (2004), Manasarovar (2010), The Arena (2013), Farewell, Mahatma (2014), Still Bleeding from the Wound (2016) and The Ghosts of Meenambakkam (2016). His poetry translations have appeared in several anthologies of literature in Indian languages and in journals such as Poetry Internetional, Circumference, Indian Literature, Caravan and The Little Magazine, among others. He has just completed translation of two novels by Poomani, the distinguished chronicler of subaltern lives, and is currently translating a collection of short stories by Salma. He has translated relatively little from English to Tamil, his mother tongue, but would like to do a lot more in future. In 2014, he published a Tamil translation of Grace Paley’s story, “The Long Distance Runner.” “The Dive” is only his second attempt in this direction.

Aňa Ostrihoňová studied English, American and French language and literature at Charles University in Prague and has a PhD in translating studies from Constantine the Philosopher University in Nitra. After living abroad for several years, including working as a translator for the European Commission and the European Parliament, she returned to Slovakia in 2011 and founded her own publishing house, INAQUE. She writes essays and book reviews and translates fiction and non-fiction from English, French and German.

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Lectures d'ailleurs is an alternative Spanish/French—French/Spanish literary translation initiative and publisher conceived and run by Professor Caroline Lepage of the University of Paris Ouest-Nanterre-La-Défense in France. With no commercial aim and comprised of both high school and university students and professors as well as professional translators—all of whom are passionate about literature and translation—this project has as its aim the diffusion of short literary forms. Only a few stories or micro-stories from a given author are published in order to give greater visibility to as many authors as possible. Stories do not need to be previously published or fit any thematic criteria; all that matters is that they are untranslated. The members of the team then read the stories and proceed to select some of them. The translation is then produced collaboratively in different workshops. Lectures d'ailleurs was created on November 4, 2012. It has produced 32 anthologies organized by country or theme and in the process translated more than 700 authors.

Poupeh Missaghi, Asymptote’s Editor-at-Large for Iran, has a PhD in English, Creative Writing, from University of Denver and an MA in Translation Studies. She works and has published as a writer, translator, editor, and educator.

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Sayuri Okamoto is a contributing editor at Asymptote. She holds degrees in art history and Japanese literature and works as a translator, writer, and curator. Born and raised in Shizuoka, Japan, she is currently living and working in London (UK) and Padua (Italy). In 2014, she received a PEN/Heim Translation Fund grant for her translation of Gozo Yoshimasu's "post-3.11" poetry series Dear Monster.

Machiel van Veen developed a liking for languages while working as a conductor on Dutch Railways, where he learned English, French, and German. He has translated John Barth’s The Sotweed Factor into Dutch as well as several other books from English and Scottish English. Based in Amsterdam, he also specializes in decoding works written using the Fractur-Alphabet.